I need beta-readers for a skinhead romance

[marco77]

I've written a skinhead romance, and I need to know if I've got the right mix between kissy kissy stuff and random violence.

Would anyone be interested in reading a beta-version and giving feedback on it? It would be about 100 pages if it was a standard size paperback.

The first chapter is here, so you'll know what to expect.
http://marcusblakeston.wordpress.com/

well, I'm always up for counter-culture reading, but paperback? sorry, it'll take too long to get here... >.>

[Adam Rebelius]

You ever hear of Gideon Sams?

so he died at 26?

[big_al]

the beta is digital or hardcopy?

[marco77]

Digital at the moment, but it'll be a paperback as well when it's finished.

I've still got the Gideon Sams book somewhere, I read it loads of times when I was young.

[homegrownterror]

i've got two bettas i could show it too, but i'm afraid they don't know how to read, and if i put my laptop in with them it'd just electrocute the water

[crystal85]

I'd like to check it out. I read every day so it wouldn't take me very long to get through it. I love sex and violence. Not a skinhead but I'd still like to read something from someone on the site.