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Dandy Jon
02-01-2009, 02:45 PM
All of my faults

I admit, everything told
Was truth, as cold
As cold as this winter can be

All my faults
I never gave in to lies
I admit all of my faults
I’m not as perfect
As anyone can be

You’ve seen
The darkness
Trapped in light
And it can’t escape
So it just fades away
Getting lost in our eyes

I confess
What I am
And what I am not
And I refuse to surrender
What little strength I have
Inside my heart

Nothing is gospel to me
Can’t you see
Bohemian I’ll forever be
There is no sadness
Inside my madness
Just vain irony

-Jon Powder-

punk rod
02-01-2009, 05:38 PM
that's really really nice! =D

Dandy Jon
02-01-2009, 05:44 PM
that's really really nice! =D

thank you, this kind of wordplay is pretty easy to conjure up

cheer(*

ASweetLittleBullet
02-01-2009, 05:53 PM
Very nice

Dandy Jon
02-02-2009, 12:18 PM
Very nice

cheer(*

Johnny Running Shoes
02-02-2009, 03:17 PM
All of my faults

I admit, everything told
Was truth, as cold
As cold as this winter can be

All my faults
I never gave in to lies
I admit all of my faults
I’m not as perfect
As anyone can be

You’ve seen
The darkness
Trapped in light
And it can’t escape
So it just fades away
Getting lost in our eyes

I confess
What I am
And what I am not
And I refuse to surrender
What little strength I have
Inside my heart

Nothing is gospel to me
Can’t you see
Bohemian I’ll forever be
There is no sadness
Inside my madness
Just vain irony

-Jon Powder-

That's great. Your dark side is lighting up.

Dandy Jon
02-03-2009, 12:58 PM
That's great. Your dark side is lighting up.

well I cant miserable all the time bro, that wouldnt be very healthy lol

cheer(*