A poem i recently wrote and cleaned up.

[BeautifulxDisaster]

Miracle.

Miracles dreampt from a little girl
In a battle to survive
In a nose dive
my body collides into lies
from men with snake eyes

Blood cascades from my aching face
Whirl. Twirl.
Thrills that kill.
A blue eyed child
Sleeping sweetly
In my soul

A woman less than human
Rage. Caged.
Medicate me
Humor me
Hear me, Hear me
Do you fear me?


I wrote this like, 2 months ago after a perticularly nasty breakup.

[Captain_Obvious]

Miracle.

Miracles dreampt from a little girl
In a battle to survive
In a nose dive
my body collides into lies
from men with snake eyes

Blood cascades from my aching face
Whirl. Twirl.
Thrills that kill.
A blue eyed child
Sleeping sweetly
In my soul

A woman less than human
Rage. Caged.
Medicate me
Humor me
Hear me, Hear me
Do you fear me?


I wrote this like, 2 months ago after a perticularly nasty breakup.

um... there's no P in Dreamt..
There's a spell check button, you know.

[opfiend]

Miracle.

Miracles dreampt from a little girl
In a battle to survive
In a nose dive
my body collides into lies
from men with snake eyes

Blood cascades from my aching face
Whirl. Twirl.
Thrills that kill.
A blue eyed child
Sleeping sweetly
In my soul

A woman less than human
Rage. Caged.
Medicate me
Humor me
Hear me, Hear me
Do you fear me?


I wrote this like, 2 months ago after a perticularly nasty breakup.

I like when poems aren't literal...like you have to search for a meaning or come up with your own. I like this and I don't like much poetry.

[ThatPunkSkanker]

Miracle.

Miracles dreampt from a little girl
In a battle to survive
In a nose dive
my body collides into lies
from men with snake eyes

Blood cascades from my aching face
Whirl. Twirl.
Thrills that kill.
A blue eyed child
Sleeping sweetly
In my soul

A woman less than human
Rage. Caged.
Medicate me
Humor me
Hear me, Hear me
Do you fear me?


I wrote this like, 2 months ago after a perticularly nasty breakup.

I like it =D

[BeautifulxDisaster]

um... there's no P in Dreamt..
There's a spell check button, you know.

If you would like to monitor all my post for spelling errors and tell me that would be nice.

[Captain_Obvious]

If you would like to monitor all my post for spelling errors and tell me that would be nice.

Don't tempt me.
See, there's a P in that one!



But on a serious note...
You said you cleaned it up. I'd hate to see the rough draft.

[BeautifulxDisaster]

Don't tempt me.
See, there's a P in that one!



But on a serious note...
You said you cleaned it up. I'd hate to see the rough draft.

Go ahead. I like seeing people who like to make fun of people for no reason demonstrate how pathetic they are. Feel free. =]

[Captain_Obvious]

Go ahead. I like seeing people who like to make fun of people for no reason demonstrate how pathetic they are. Feel free. =]

Oh don't take things so fucking seriously.
Lighten up, It's the internet.

[BeautifulxDisaster]

Oh don't take things so fucking seriously.
Lighten up, It's the internet.

I do have a little tendency to take things seriously when it comes to my poems. I'll work on it for you.

[Captain_Obvious]

I do have a little tendency to take things seriously when it comes to my poems. I'll work on it for you.

Fuck what I think. If you're letting me bug you because you misspelled one word, you're in for a rough time. Poetry critics are a hell of a lot more critical.

[BeautifulxDisaster]

Fuck what I think. If you're letting me bug you because you misspelled one word, you're in for a rough time. Poetry critics are a hell of a lot more critical.

I've been critizied before i know what its like. Im really not upset, I just enjoy a good disscusion you know?

[Captain_Obvious]

I've been critizied before i know what its like. Im really not upset, I just enjoy a good disscusion you know?

yeah, I know.. I'm just saying if you want people to take your poetry seriously, you're going to have to work on your spelling. No one wants to read a poem from a semi-illiterate. Not saying you are. But that's what people see.

[BeautifulxDisaster]

yeah, I know.. I'm just saying if you want people to take your poetry seriously, you're going to have to work on your spelling. No one wants to read a poem from a semi-illiterate. Not saying you are. But that's what people see.

I honestly looked for a spell check and it wasnt there =/

[Captain_Obvious]

I honestly looked for a spell check and it wasnt there =/

Yeah.. I don't know why...
But here ya go.. CLICK (http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/dreamt)

The spell checker should've picked up on "perticularly" too